Egypt is a great country. In fact, tourists
like to visit a lot of places in Egypt. They are visiting the
Egyptian museum. They like seeing Tut an Khamoun and his jewellery. They are
visiting the pyramids. They are riding camels and horses. The tourists like visiting
luxor in winter.
They are visiting the temple of Karnak in Luxor.
They can see lots of statues, coins and other objects in the temple of karnak. The tourists love come to Egypt every
year. Tourists like visitin Egypt
because it has a lot of wonderful places.
Good, but take care of the following:
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2-You should use the present simple not the present continuous.